The place should be familiar, but without him, it is as strange as her solitude. She looks at the rugged landscape, the desolate ruins, and the massive tower, the alien sentinel. Alone, she would now face the Enemy, in her hands his swords, in her heart his courage, and her eternal love for him. How is it, she thought, that I am immortal and he was not? And she knows the answer: he was human, and she no longer is.
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Of Glass & Paper 
Wicked!
Stunning imagery and I love ending. I wish there were more but of course also feel that stopping here leaves room for the reader’s imagination.
Overall spectacular piece!
Keep on writing,
Nada
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Amazing story told in 5 sentences! The ending was powerful!
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A wonderful tale, with strong emotion laced within each word. The ending left me pondering. 😉 Nicely done!
http://glynis-imaginings.blogspot.com/2013/12/five-sentence-fictionneglectfulness.html
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A great tale.
I’d love to know what happened next.
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