We saw you, in the immensity of the skies, soaring, oblivious of us.
A perfect geometry, beyond human skills, but not beyond our hearts.
We wished you farewell, my lens failing to seize but a fraction of your beauty in flight.
Then we turned to each other, smiling.
And she said: “I know how to make you fly too…”
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“beyond human skills, but not beyond our hearts…” I love that! Wonderful imagery, inspiring writing.
Thanks Honore!
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your pen, lens never sway…falter. as always, perfection. X
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I love this. You have a wonderful way with words.
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Well written, charged tale.
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wunderschön ! Thank you
huggs Christin
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Your 5SF is always one I check out and never am I disappointed. Very poetic…
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Very beautifully written. Lovely imagery. I feel the same way when I’m blessed with such a vision.
http://injaynesworld.blogspot.com/2013/07/injaynesworld-its-nature-of-flight.html
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perfect
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