#FiveSentenceFiction: Paradise

To Susan

Waiting for him His dedication to his work is exemplary, and he is admired by colleagues and friends.

But in the depth of his heart he hides a wonderful secret, a secret always present, as he works through the day.

Only he – and the one who shares his life – know the secret: it is their shared treasure, the magic link between them when he is away.

She has the key, and she knows, every evening he will be there, at their door…

For she is the guardian, collared, fragile, her white skin like snow in Spring, her lips so red, waiting to open for him the door of Paradise.

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10 Responses to #FiveSentenceFiction: Paradise

  1. deanabo says:

    This is really good!

  2. Well done, mysterious, lending much to the imagination.

  3. McGuffy Ann says:

    This is very good, mysterious, lending much to the imagination.

  4. Jemima Pett says:

    A fascinating idea and so beautifully executed! :) I dropped in to see if you are doing the A to Z Challenge again this year and you are! Look forward to dropping in again in April – bye for now!
    Jemima at Jemima’s blog

  5. TemptingSweets99 says:

    These five sentences really did pack a punch. I enjoyed reading it, very much.

  6. MaríMar says:

    Beautiful…. The last sentence, just took my breath away.
    xoxo

  7. I always love reading your words…such beauty!

  8. This is really cool. Keeping the mystery open and allowing the imagination to take flight. The photo is exquisite! Thank you much for being passing by and joining my little world of Simplicity of Being!

  9. fgassette says:

    Welcome! Thank you for subscribing to follow my blog. I hope you are encouraged, inspired and enjoy the photos I take of life’s events as seen through the lens of my camera.
    BE ENCOURAGED! BE BLESSED!

  10. mirabella says:

    Bellissima!! So beautiful love! Heart sighed true. Stunning and sublime …grazie for sharing your heart …a treasure. Bells xxx

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